Develop a Real YA Spy Thriller Series – DiploBrats. Help a real author turn real draft manuscripts into bestsellers!

What you will learn

Learn how to self-edit your own writing

Learn how to review and edit fiction

Provide feedback to a real-life YA author

Help develop a YA novel into a compelling read

Help make civic discourse cool again

Improve your own storytelling and writing

Description

Organized as a workshop format, this practical course teaches students how to edit, how to review, and how to do literary critique on Young Adult (YA) fiction using a real draft manuscript that is under development with a goal of traditional publication.  This class offers participants the chance to interact with a real author and help shape a Young Adult manuscript in progress to publication.  Students will learn how to improve their own storytelling, writing, self-editing, and reviewing skills.  Students will have the opportunity to pass their feedback directly to the author, MV Donovan, so that it can be incorporated to make DiploBrats the very best it can be for readers like them!

Introduction

  • M.V. Donovan’s professional biography
  • The DiploBrats series & mission

Storytelling Module

  • Video and slides
  • Opening hooks and story arc
  • Knowing your audience

Review Module


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  • Critique versus editing
  • Four “passes”
    • Clarity of purpose/plot
    • Internal cohesion
    • Story elements – characters, setting, etc.
    • Editorial mechanics

Guided Exercise

  • Read DiploBrats Book 1 first 2500 words
  • Consider editor’s critique memo and edits
  • Evaluate revised opening

Independent Critiques

  • Read unedited middle passages
  • Prepare own memo and in-line comments
  • Submit to author to assist draft revisions

Optional Final Assignment

  • Thanks for the help!
  • Welcome to join The Civic Compass community
  • Offer to review Advance Reader Copy of novel
English
language

Content

Introduction – MV Donovan, The Civic Compass, and the DiploBrats Series

Introduction to DiploBrats
Who is the Author, MV Donovan?
What is the inspiration behind the DiploBrats series?
What is the Mission of DiploBrats?

A Guide to Literary Critique

What are the goals of this workshop?
A primer on storytelling
How to review and improve your written work

A guided exercise in literary critique

The first few pages – capturing your audience’s imagination

Independent Exercises – Critique Three Scenes

Scene One – Teenage Party Scene
Scene Two – Meeting Migrants in Calais
Scene Three – Interviewing Civil Servants About Human Migration

Character Development

Introduction to the Donovan Family
Meet Jacob Donovan
Meet Sophie Donovan
Meet Mrs. Donovan
Meet Mr. Donovan

Optional Final Assignment – Join the Advanced Review Copy Team

Optional Final Exercise – Review the Entire Manuscript
DiploBrats and the Migrating Masses trailer video